Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 4 and my teacher is Ms Smith. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Wednesday, April 8, 2020
Poem
Lie in bed a little longer
Outside in our yard
Cookies all over the couch
Knowing this is for the best
Dogs on a walk
Out on a bike ride
Walking with my family
Noodles geting made
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Hi JoeJoe
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your great poem. I have to say I am loving being able to sleep a little longer in the morning. Are you enjoying that too? I like the line about cookies on the couch, I hope you didn't make too much of a mess.
Miss Smith-Palmer
yes i am
Deletehi joe cool poem
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