Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 4 and my teacher is Ms Smith. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Thursday, April 2, 2020
If I was an animal.
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Hi Jojo
ReplyDeleteFirstly let me say great writing!
If I were an animal i would be a dog, not just any dog but my dog Max. He has the best life. He has his own bed in the living room and the bedroom. He sleeps when ever he fancies and when he wants to play he grabs a toy and throws it at you. He gets a walk everyday and can go for a ride in the car if he wants. He has a dog flap so can come and go as he pleases. Basically he has no worries and the only thing he hates is the bath.
Do you have any pets?
No I do not have any pets. I would love one but my mum says they are too messy. have a nice day Joe Joe.
DeleteI agree with Mrs Simanu - Jojo what a fantastic piece of writing!
ReplyDeleteI think if I could be any animal in the world I would be a Dolphin. I just love to swim, my parents always said I might be a mermaid I enjoyed the water too much! Dolphins are glorious to watch and if you every get the opportunity to swim with one, it is a real thrill of an adventure.
Miss Gill.
that is so cool from Joe Joe
ReplyDeletegood job. From Zoe
ReplyDeleteI wish cod to
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